How longer sanity
Insanity I wish Thee
Come to my rescue
As I need to flee
Belief and confidence at the nadir
I’m becoming more skeptical by the day
I wish I smiled from heart
Can’t take trust breached again
I wish to smile
To speak, to share thoughts
Can you help today
Or is it again nay say
If the cord with present broke
And they called me mad
Left me alone
In a world that is mine
Ye, Gods
I look to the Heavens above
And beseech your favour
For life to bloom again.
Guesses on what might have caused the lines are welcome
Well Written.. and if you feeling a bit down.. dont worry .. tomorrow is a new day..
ReplyDeleteI dont know what could have brought the lines on.. But whatever it is Hope life is blooming again.. Soon
Take care
hey .. very unlike of you...!!!
ReplyDeleteany waysss.. could not guess that, but i can wish you the whole power to come out of it in flying colours...:)
Take care...:)
I am aware. And I want to throttle u for it. :X
ReplyDeleteWell...not for the whole thing...but partly, yes.... :|
About the poem, I already told you. I am hatless. So, nothing to throw this time :D
Very well written !! Nice words !!
ReplyDeletenice one..my guess work is really pathetic..I might end up guessing something totally weird..so I will wait for your answer (if at all you wanna give one) :D
ReplyDeletetill then, take care buddy.. :)
life is not blooming presently?..poetry will resolve it!
ReplyDeleteHang in there Lama..
ReplyDeleteI can never guess, coz I'm pretty bad at it :( I just wish you the best and I hope you feel better, soon :)
Beautiful words straight from the heart...sometimes insanity looks like a better option, since in this sane world we are bound to do what ppl expect us to...and sometimes that can really be suffocating..
ReplyDeletecant guess..but sometimes heart breaks or naysayers are also necessary to keep us sane..take care and tomorrow is always another day..better day.
ReplyDeleteBikram
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it. And thanks for the wish
Being Promoda
You flew in to wish me good. How sweet.
Destinys Child
I buy you another hat soon;)
Unseen Rajasthan
Happy to win an admirer
Neha
You should have guessed
Tomz
May it soon
Shruthi
Send me some flowers
A New beginning
You seem to have gone through a similar phase.
Renu
Welcome back after long time.
I cant guess what made you write it ,
ReplyDeleteBut whatever it is , that too , will pass.
Hang in there!
Good one..may god bless you and enable your life to bloom again :)
ReplyDeleteOhhh...beautiful...!!
ReplyDeleteThat was truly straight from the heart...I cud feel the emotions...
neat!!
Keep writing Lama!!:)
Gymnast
ReplyDeleteAm trying my level best.
Anish
Send some of your ghosts to help out:)
Jaunty Anima
I just read your post and was short of right words to praise. Thanks for the perking up comment.
I don't know what's bogging you down so much. Well, I almost know, but don't know how I can make you feel better. I've just got a small perk-up chant for you (I'm sure 'Lama' doesn't need it coz you're the centre of all the fun), however here goes...Let's chant together "Aal is well" breathe-in, breathe-out. One more time "Aal is well" breathe-in, breathe-out. Again "Aal is well" breathe-in, breathe-out. Say it a hundred times, still don't feel better, a thousand times...u there? Where were we??
ReplyDeleteOh you are down!! I understand. It happens but dont worry this too shall pass. Cheer up!! :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written but i wish the reason which made you write this vanish away very soon.Bhagwaan hamaare doston ko bahut khush rakhe.Amen !!
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ReplyDeleteI tried and failed.
Insignia
Have been hoping so
Kavita
May what you wished come true
As long as you can keep writing beautiful lines, you will be okay. It tears the tear out of tearful and leaves you with ful(l). I hope that whatever is bothering you hightails it outta there. Good wishes coming your way!
ReplyDeleteHey why are you so down? Don't be, Ok? Please don't...
ReplyDeletewalk2write
ReplyDeleteThank You. I need lots of good wishes to put things right around here.:)
Novice Writer
Maybe sensitivity is a bad quality to have.